Here is my entry to the Nokia Project Gener8: Pier Roxas Story
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WHO IS PIER ROXAS?
Pier Roxas was Martin Sam, a contestant in an “Amazing Race”-kind of of a foreign reality TV show who set foot in the Philippines for their final shoot.
The contestants had a goal of finding the specific clue hidden in the island of Corregidor. From Quezon City as their point of origin, the contestants may choose their route with all the limited resources that they had.
THE CONTEST
The contestants are without any assistant or companion. They carry a GPS-tracked mobile and camera phone through which periodically they need to connect to internet to upload their whereabouts. Every internet connectivity has points being earned for their budget. They also need to shoot ads of sponsors for additional points.
While other contestants chose routes by land (North Expressway Way to Pampanga and Bataan or to down south to Cavite) Martin Sam took the direct route through Manila Bay even with a limited budget.
However, with this chosen route, Martin was able to earn more points and budget by hopping amongst the sponsor-rich places like Mall of Asia, Hotels, the Baywalk area, Rizal Park and many night-life establishments in Manila. Going to these places with all the featured sponsors (credit card, clothing line, money remittance centers, cellphone and computer accessories, etc) would give the contestants more budget on top of the incurred expenses. The money allowance was sent through a credit card or remittance.
The contestants were not allowed to communicate with their family or anyone else via the internet. The handsets had empty phonebook. They were also forbidden to reveal anything about themselves and about the show. The TV production crew may communicate with the contestants for instructions and monitoring. There were also field spies that verify their activities.
Martin stayed in one of the best hotels in Manila. He kept the very first parking ticket at the basement of a famous wellness center near the hotel in order to avail discounts in personal care services offered by this center.
Other contestants had Quezon City for north route and Makati for south route as their “grazing” cities.
After the allotted five days of earning points for their budget, Martin and the rest of the contestant were all set to go to the tourist island of Corregidor.
Martin bought two pairs of formal wear in a well-known clothing line (also a sponsor). He flirted with a beautiful travel agent named Myra who declined his short-notice request for a yacht that would take him to Corregidor. He convinced her instead to be his personal tour guide and translator.
Martin was able to find a small private yacht that would take him to Corregidor. He personally asked Myra to pretend as his girlfriend. Myra assisted him in renting this yacht. The yacht had a small private room and it was manned by two crew.
After sailing for few hours, they reached the island of Corregidor. Martin was unable to proceed with the clue-hunting activity if Myra was around. So he asked her to find a place in the nearby town of Mariveles and the nearest city of Balanga. The yacht docked in the Orion Port.
Martin asked Myra to buy hard-to-find local items and to send it through a courier. While Myra was out and busy, Martin sneaked to go back to Corregidor. They just met late in the evening at the hotel.
After two days, Martin successfully found the hidden clue. He needed to go back to Manila lest other contestants might catch up with him.
When Martin and Myra were about to board the yacht in Orion, Myra kissed the collar of Martin to pretend that they had been together. Martin already showed signs of exhaustion during that time.
It was already late in the evening. Martin asked the yacht crew to stop engine when they were far offshore and no cellular signal was possible. Martin was aware also that other contestants had no way to get back to Manila in the middle of the night. He decided to spend the night on board and wake up early on the following day.
Myra locked herself in the private room while Martin and one of the crew had casual drinks. In order to protect her, Martin asked for the key of the room.
But the cabin crew naughtily hid the key and would be given only if Martin can beat him in a drinking duel. Martin knew that he would lose because he has weak knees on native vodkas. He drank a few shots and insisted for another turn.
Martin was also uneasy because he had spent much that he was almost with empty pocket.
Under the influence of liquor, Martin revealed his true identity to the two crew. He promised that that he would pay the agreed remaining amount after the contest or after winning the prize. Martin asked to start the engine.
The crew were very angry not only because of unsettled payment but also an exposure of their underground operations. One of the cabin crew punched Martin on his face. Martin fell on the floor.
Myra was awoken by the commotion and the sound of the engine. The crew asked Myra if she knew about Martin’s adventures but Myra didn’t say a word.
Myra asked for the room key so she could attend to Martin. Myra locked themselves in the room and she slid the key to Martin’s trouser pocket. Then she heard the first SMS tone from the Nokia N8 of Martin. The message said “Congrats Martin, you are a few miles from your trophy. Take a shot of the MOA Globe when you get here.”
Myra took the wallet of Martin. She also inspected all his belongings. She explored that phone and she found pictures, videos and itinerary memos that she didn’t know when they were together. Myra turned to the cabin crew and asked to drop them at the MOA. But the cabin crew insisted that Martin would disembark only with his clothes and leaving everything else behind.
But Myra warned them that they were already monitored by the TV network through the GPS tracking of the mobile phone.
The cabin crew were puzzled. They manoeuvred towards LUNETA but they received a SMS saying “Why veering away?”
The cabin crew got frightened and they proceeded to the nearest port in Roxas Boulevard. Myra grabbed Martin’s phone and made a gesture of calling the authorities if they would not drop them off safely on nearby port.
The cabin crew had no choice but to let them go. They asked Myra to turn the unit off. Myra removed the sim and she also took the memory card.
They docked on the CCP area. The yacht immediately left the area after dropping off Martin and Myra. The latter was able to secure her personal shoulder bag inside a plastic bag containing rags that are full of vomits.
Myra was hesitant to get the phone of Martin lest she would be GPS-tracked too. She wanted to call the police or ambulance but she was afraid that she would be involved in this case. She decided to just leave the Nokia N8 with a Smart Sim. Turning the unit on would notify the network. So she ran away with Martin’s wallet, and the memory card from cellphone.
When Martin woke up in the morning along the pier, he remembered nothing. He turned on the mobile phone. After few minutes, the phone rang – the TV network was calling. Martin hastily answered the call and asked for help.
Then the TV production team arrived and Martin began to remember things when the team showed him his recorded and tracked itinerary. The attending physician said that Martin had temporary senile dementia.
Then one of the production team asked Martin, “Isnt she beautiful?”. Martin replied, “Who?”
Myra during that time broke into tears in front of her computer staring blankly on screen. The memory card she got was empty.
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did you made it to the top 8?
ReplyDeleteprobably no. I have not received a call/email from nokia. Anong petsa na?
ReplyDeleteOk lang.
In writing this story, there are many considerations:
ReplyDelete1. The feature of the phone MUST be highlighted.
a. HD
b. photoblogging
C. GEO-TAGGING (through GPS)
d. internet connectivity
2. The story must explain the unique significance of Roxas Boulevard (i.e. the story cannot happen elsewhere)
3. Having a SMART GOLD SIM ( a postpaid plan) has something to do with work, corporate, business etc.
4. The unidentified key is NOT a car key nor a Hotel Key.
5. A lipstick mark on the collar is different from a lipstick smudge. The lipstick mark must be an intentional display.
6. Normally a parking ticket is kept inside the car. It is taken out IF you want to avail discounts by showing your parking ticket.
7. A selective loss of memory for 8 days suggests that the past 8-day period was one related activity.
8. The story must explain why the phone was still there despite having a missing wallet.
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Sana maibenta ko na lang ang story na ito sa Samsung o kaya sa Sony Ericsson.
It's funny how both you and me are pretty much on the same wavelength when it comes to solving the Pier Roxas enigma.
ReplyDeleteHere's the link:http://www.facebook.com/note.php?note_id=167099033312169&id=619442374
Did you get a call from a Nokia rep? They were asking me if I have a film and video editing background. After i told them i don't, they never called back.
Now I realized, although belatedly, that this contest was never about finding plausible storylines. It was more about finding good film makers that can showcase the video capturing features of the N8 in the best light, inspite of working with a very mediocre screenplay.
Love your piece btw.
Cheers
Rafael Dimagiba
The reason why your story was not selected perhaps was due to its multiple locations and multiple character.
ReplyDeleteWhen the Nokia rep called me, he asked me if I can provide the actors and the props, as there will be little or no budget when the 8 finalists are filming.
If the reason of not selecting me is logistics, then they are not actually thinking.
ReplyDeleteFor the above story, you dont need to reconstruct everything on many places. This story highlights geotagging. For filming part here is the sequence,
Sequence 1: Arrival of TV production team van, they have a doctor with them to explain his dementia.
Seq 2: The production head interrogates MArtin about what had happened. The head has his laptop showing the graphical locations where Martin had been. Then the head would show series of pictures and videos taken by Martin.
Seq 3: Martin reviews every pictures taken.
Seq 4: Martin notice a set of picture where he is not the one taking the picture - it must be the girl Myra.
Seq 5: The production head shows the graphical animation of activities done in Corregidor.
Seq 6: A video of scene inside the yacht. Can be faked easily.
Seq 7: Martin and Myra were dropped off the CPP pier. Myra left him.
Seq 8: Ending: Myra, in her house crying in front of the computer. The memory card was empty. Martin opens the saved pictures and videos stored in the internal memory of phone. Martin stared at one single photo of him and Myra. Then he utterred her name.
You dont need to spend much for filming this.
Well, Nokia doesn't know that. Did you include and explain that on your story? I mean, did you explain to them how you can make a story and not spend much? You didn't, did you? Your story is amazing like Rafael and John... but I am scared, if they think you don't have the a background in film making or by just reading your story alone, it's quite luxurious, then that's the very first problem.
ReplyDeleteBut hey, try to sell your story to Samsung and Sony Ericsson.
Just the mere fact that the nokia rep asked Rafael about his know-how on film and video editing is itself ANOMALOUS. It is not included in the mechanics and even in the criteria of judging, is it?
ReplyDeleteThis is the common problem of this kind of contest. They do not stick to the rules. I joined a songwriting contest, it ended with live performance contest.
Here it is. I joined a storyline contest but it ended with filmmaking and editing contest.
Maybe next time i will join an essay-writing contest that will end up with research-writing contest.
I joined it too. My sentiments on the contest and entry are in my blog. Hope you'll get to read it too.
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http://seeminglyscarletnights.blogspot.com/2010/12/hmmm-boo-nokia-and-smart.html
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